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Chapter 5 Page 15

9th Sep 2016, 11:01 PM in New Deal, Old Wound
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Chapter 5 Page 15
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Zeph 9th Sep 2016, 11:01 PM edit delete
Zeph
Sorry the page is late. Had lots of stuff to do for my first week of college. But I finished it, with 1 minute left.
Please vote for the comic on

I hope you guys like the page so far.

Also just realized my minute disappeared. It's now Saturday, ah well. Still Friday on the west coast.
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Milk 10th Sep 2016, 1:19 PM edit delete reply
Milk
That's a bold panel there with the blood drips and heavy lines. Very impactful. Rachel is about to get caught in her underwear...stinking of energy drinks and burritos...with a blood and tear stained face. But who is going to patch that hole in the wall?! >:0

(Lol, We've got similar explaining to do.)

Zeph 11th Sep 2016, 4:45 PM edit delete reply
Zeph
They just need to hire a carpenter with a specialization in patching up holes in walls for a living. :D

I think Christian's hole in the wall is a little harder to fix though XD.
Thanks for all the support on the comic.
lirvilas 16th Sep 2016, 10:35 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
Sempai is wise.
man in black 10th Sep 2016, 6:45 PM edit delete reply
man in black
Hopefully she is safe
Zeph 11th Sep 2016, 4:46 PM edit delete reply
Zeph
She's fine, nobodies mad at Rachel, she was just in the wrong place, at the wrong time.
Shirokuro 11th Sep 2016, 5:49 PM edit delete reply
Shirokuro
I just binged this cause I've been meaning to for a while and I found an opening. (This has nothing to do with the thread you made *whistles*) anyway... First I gotta say: love the art reminds me a lot of Tetsuya nomuras art style rich I LOVE. Second: this is definetly a character-driven comic to me (wish I love ) tho might be a little slow-paced for people who expect a lot of action... I totally ship syn and Andy and the last pages just killed my heart. It's gonna be interesting following this comic and all the lovable characters. Good job!
Zeph 11th Sep 2016, 5:58 PM edit delete reply
Zeph
Thanks for reading, and yeah Tetsuya Nomura is one of my inspirations.
Yeah it's a bit slow for now, but it's character driven, so the action has more meaning when you know the characters.
...(RockB) 13th Sep 2016, 6:27 PM edit delete reply
...(RockB)
OK, like Shirokuro I read the whole thing through, and this has totally something to do with the thread you started. I am that honest.

And to continue with being honest: The art is great, all over the whole thing, while I like the few last pages the best (not least because the bigger & better-readable font in the speech bubbles) and the gray pages least. Also, the storytelling has something.

But in the end I don't think I will stay reading. Main reason is that the theme of the story is not my cup of tea. Too much violence. Somewhere in between you asked about one's favorite characters... my answer: None of them. None I like or dislike more than the others, somehow I can't relate to them.

On the other hand, I did read the whole comic... normally I stop reading after a few pages when I don't like the theme or anything about it. So yeah, something about it made me read on even though I discovered soon that it was not within my range of interest. Kudos for being able to do that to me... :)
Zeph 13th Sep 2016, 8:36 PM edit delete reply
Zeph
Fair enough.
lirvilas 16th Sep 2016, 10:30 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
Uh, it's called PLASTIC BULLETS MAYHEM funking UNLOADED

bro

not "hugs 'n' kisses for all who participated"

Zeph, you keep doing what you're doing. I ain't your yoogest of fans, but let's not kid ourselves, this isn't a comic about "mutual validation through finger painting".

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***MOAR BULLETZ***

SRSly let's get back to BSNS and shoot some motherfunkers
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